100 word challenge-the key...

I was walking on grass when I tripped over, something super sparkling. I picked it up it was a key, but the moment I picked it up, it shimmered so brightly that I had to close my eyes! Then I had to show my mum, but on the way home, a door appeared in front of me. Then some words came out on a piece of paper, it said, come in there's something very cool. I would normally not go in , but I really like cool stuff, so I went in. Then I was lost! I should not listen to that. so annoying ...

My Reflection
WALT: use describing words to give our writing meaning.

I think I did well at describing the words

Next time I will do a even weirder story if there is next time.

WALT: brainstorm and write a poem using simple imagery;publish our poems using google slides

My Reflection
 I found this easy because all you have to do is write Did You Ever write the poem and choose a picture next time I need to work on being faster.

My Welcome Post 2016

Welcome to my year 4 learning blog. This year I am in room  15 and my teacher is Miss Massey. I enjoy playing with my friends. This year I am looking forward to having lots of friends. I hope you will enjoy my blog and leave lots of feedback.