Tuesday 23 August 2016
Thursday 18 August 2016
The Creepy Nightmare
BOOM ,CRASH I was finding my glittering tiara, then suddenly out of nowhere a book appeared, it's tittle was TIARA. I opened the book and in that book it wrote:
At the tallest mountain,
At the tallest house,
There is something shiny
That will brighten your eyes!
When I saw that I quickly and quietly readied my bag and tip toed like a mouse without letting my mum see, I went out the door, over big thick mountain, and over the tallest house I saw...
Ahhhhhhh what was that I could feel! IT'S a ghost! suddenly I woke up, it scared me so badly!
My Reflection I was learning to use parts of speech to add interest and detail to my writing. I found this easy because I already have the story in my mind. In this activity I had to write a story with only 100 words. My next steps in my writing are to write it quicker.
Ahhhhhhh what was that I could feel! IT'S a ghost! suddenly I woke up, it scared me so badly!
My Reflection I was learning to use parts of speech to add interest and detail to my writing. I found this easy because I already have the story in my mind. In this activity I had to write a story with only 100 words. My next steps in my writing are to write it quicker.
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