100 word challenge The Haunted House

                                                                  My Reflection

                                     WALT use a range of part of speech to add interest detail.

          I achieved my success criteria because I first wrote the story then I added in personification,                                                                         onomatopoeia and similes.

                    my next step is to add some more personification and onomatopoeia.   

Term 2 Week 7 Dear Dairy

                                                                       Dear Dairy
   
A while ago at  school we were learning about matter, the year 4 teachers, students and parents were here. We were going to different classes to do different activity. Room 15 was doing the lava lamps, room 14 was doing the gloop, room 13 was doing the egg experiments, room 12 was doing the feely bags and at the auditorium was a video about matter. my teacher said we have to walk around the school quietly and quickly.

my first activity 

Matariki Acrostic Poem

                      My Reflection
WALT write a acrostic poem about Matariki
  I think I have reached my success criteria.
          next step is to add more detail. 
          

Spirit Of The Bird

                                                                 My Reflection

WALT: answer a range or comprehension questions 

I think I have reached my reflection 

I feel really proud of my work

I think I did very well on my work,

my next step is to Add more detail to my answers.

100 word challenge Red Riding Hood

                                   My Reflection
WALT use strategies to add detail to our writing
I feel good about my work because it's lovely and it is one my best work I have done so far.
I am also very proud of my work because it is really interesting when I read it.
I think I achieved my learning attention.

What am I

                                       My Reflection
WALT compare and measure length and height in different ways have measured my height and  arm length in hands, metres and centimetres. i can say what shape my arms and height make me.