Thursday 30 June 2016

100 word challenge The Haunted House


                                                                  My Reflection
                                     WALT use a range of part of speech to add interest detail.
          I achieved my success criteria because I first wrote the story then I added in personification,                                                                         onomatopoeia and similes.
                    my next step is to add some more personification and onomatopoeia.   

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